Today's assignment: All, Here’s the on-line assignment for today (since I’ve had to cancel class due to the weather) If you are unable to leave these comments below, please email them to me!
1. Visit 5 of your classmates blogs at this link and leave constructive comments: http://www.art105bcc.blogspot.com/
2. Your comment must cover the following: Which three design principles could be considered more carefully in order to improve your (5) classmate’s overall designs, and how should these principles be specifically implemented? Be very specific to receive full credit. Remember, you are critique five (5) different projects made by five of your classmates.
3. With each of the five (5) designs you chose for question #1, choose one (1) personality “word/term” and describe how this word could be adjusted in order to reflect its meaning more accurately. Which design principles should be implemented (and how should they be specifically used) in order to get the “word or personality term” to express its meaning more directly?
I love this! Especially the way you did the word "creative" i think thats really cool. And you can tell the focal point is the word talkative. Theres also flow going on theres a path that goes from talkative to loving to adventerous to creative to trustworthy. Good job :)
I really like this piece of art work however, I'm not sure that you have a definite flow to this piece. My eye goes to adventurous first but then I'm not sure where to go to next either to creative or loving
You're definitely showing your creative side with this piece and I like how you expressed the meaning of your words - especially 'Creative'.
There are two suggestions I would make to improve this piece. One, I would try adding some color in - as your words seem to be warm, friendly words it throws them off a bit when they are shown only in black and white. Second, I would work on the hierarchy a bit. At first I'm drawn to 'Loving' but I'm not sure where to go to after that.
B - You need to post your project essay!
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Here’s the on-line assignment for today (since I’ve had to cancel class due to the weather)
If you are unable to leave these comments below, please email them to me!
1. Visit 5 of your classmates blogs at this link and leave constructive comments:
http://www.art105bcc.blogspot.com/
2. Your comment must cover the following:
Which three design principles could be considered more carefully in order to improve your (5) classmate’s overall designs, and how should these principles be specifically implemented? Be very specific to receive full credit. Remember, you are critique five (5) different projects made by five of your classmates.
3. With each of the five (5) designs you chose for question #1, choose one (1) personality “word/term” and describe how this word could be adjusted in order to reflect its meaning more accurately. Which design principles should be implemented (and how should they be specifically used) in order to get the “word or personality term” to express its meaning more directly?
Good luck and see you Monday!
Professor Groat
I love this! Especially the way you did the word "creative" i think thats really cool. And you can tell the focal point is the word talkative. Theres also flow going on theres a path that goes from talkative to loving to adventerous to creative to trustworthy. Good job :)
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ReplyDeleteI love all of this!!
ReplyDeleteI really like this piece of art work however, I'm not sure that you have a definite flow to this piece. My eye goes to adventurous first but then I'm not sure where to go to next either to creative or loving
ReplyDeleteYou're definitely showing your creative side with this piece and I like how you expressed the meaning of your words - especially 'Creative'.
ReplyDeleteThere are two suggestions I would make to improve this piece. One, I would try adding some color in - as your words seem to be warm, friendly words it throws them off a bit when they are shown only in black and white. Second, I would work on the hierarchy a bit. At first I'm drawn to 'Loving' but I'm not sure where to go to after that.